Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Do You by ~hikarikira:iconhikarikira:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




Do you?

Do you know how hard it is for me
to be with you everyday?
But to not reach out and pull you close,
and kiss the pain away?

Do you not know the love I feel
every time I’m close to you?
I want to hole you to me and make you mine,
but I’m afraid of what you’ll do.

Do you not see the pain you cause,
each time you pull away?
The only thing I could ever want is you,
to say what you can\'t say.

Do you feel the same way I do
deep inside your heart?
Is it like half of your soul is missing,
whenever we’re apart?

Do you know that if I owned the world,
I would give it all to you?
And all I could ever want in exchange,
is to hear you say, “I love you.”
©2003-2010 ~hikarikira
:iconhikarikira:

Author's Comments

Okay. Last poem i will write for a while, i think. This is one of my favs.

I had fun with the picture...yea...

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconkitika:
~kitika Jun 6, 2003, 10:29:21 AM
ahhh why is there no love deviation i have to remeber when i get onto a decent computer to add it to my faves. wow i decide to check out poetry for the first time and i get this wowowwowowowowowowow Worship :wavewave:
i love the structure and everything especially the fisrt 2 lines of verse 5

Do not try and bend the spoon ... yummoi

--
"The time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time"
:iconmokurai:
~mokurai Jun 6, 2003, 11:34:36 AM
This is great, you kept the rhythm the whole time, I don't think you even missed a beat.

Great job. +fav

--
... it's just about knowing where everyone stands.
:icontaintedmafioso:
~taintedmafioso Jun 6, 2003, 11:42:19 AM
Do you feel the same way I do
deep inside your heart?
Is it like half of your soul is missing,
whenever we’re apart?

God I love that part

--
.:.The opposite of the religious fanatic is not the fanatical athiest but the gentle cynic who cares not whether there is a god or not.:. - Eric Hoffer
:iconebonyvortex:
~ebonyvortex Jun 6, 2003, 12:48:42 PM
Meh.

You have way too much free time when coloring, that 'cha do!

Call me if ya want too. Leaving the house at 5:30 tho. Wun be back till after horses tom.

--
Teehee.
:iconkentuski:
~kentuski Jun 6, 2003, 12:54:35 PM
This is very beautiful! It has a nice rythm to it too! ^___^ Keep at it! The piccie fits nicely too! *gives her a hug* Hug

--
Wanna read a Yu Gi Oh parody?

Go See: Yu-Gi-NO!!!!
~XxSwampThingxX
:iconkitika:
~kitika Jun 7, 2003, 8:45:55 AM
haha i am back and with a decent computer, to the favourite button

--
"The time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time"
:icondreamcatcher20:
~dreamcatcher20 Jun 7, 2003, 5:06:31 PM
Do you not know the love I feel
every time I’m close to you?
I want to hole you to me and make you mine,
but I’m afraid of what you’ll do.

i love this part the most. i am going through this right now. i am faving this.

--
To love, to care, to listen...i am here.
:iconsilvertopaz:
~silvertopaz Jun 17, 2003, 3:26:39 AM
i like this heaps
i think it would apply to heaps of people, myself included.
love the emotions that come from this piece
:iconroundup-2003:
~roundup-2003 Jun 26, 2003, 1:32:33 PM
sweet. . . I really like this one.

--
If it doesn't kill me, I'll survive.
Previous Page123Next Page

Details

June 6, 2003
158 KB
578×732

Statistics

21
5 [who?]
187 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map

©2010 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy